WILF:
- a Cleary stated opinion
- at least 3 resasons with evidence or examples to support the opinion
I have been working on: using correct sentences
My next step is to elaborate my ideas
WALT: use poetic writing features in poetry
WILF: completed ode, limericks or haiku use Inge the correct formate
I have been working on useing metaphor's in poetry
My next step is to use onomatopoeia
This is my persuasive writing
No more dumping nappies
It is clear that adults should stop dumping their child’s nappies,did you know the average baby goes through 6-8 nappies a day.
When adults (or nappies users ) dump them next to water way, most will role into water way,rivers and wetlands which would highly likely pullet the water.
Nappies pullet places where you dump nappies so we lose some of our wild life and water ways,wetlands and rivers and they can also kill birds that think it is food.
Nappies are also for people who need them not for wetlands,water ways and rivers.
In connection, adults (or nappies users) should stop dumping nappies and take they to the dump.
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