Metaphor's

WALT: use metaphors to make our writing more descriptive. We took part in a “Get NZ Writing” project. We wrote on postcards and had to describe ourselves using metaphors. We sent our postcards to Hukanui School in Hamilton. They sent postcards back to us. Here are some metaphors from my poem. When Bryn is cooked he is a pizza sizzling with delight Bryn is a dog running wild into the sunset